The revision I am focusing
on is changing my introduction. My reviewer was a little confused because of
the multiple questions I asked in the beginning. I am also taking out a
reference I thought was necessary. I need to add more and stay focused on the song.
I am thinking about adding in the music video, to be able to describe the
meaning and analysis more vivid. I need more information in regards to why the
singer chose to sing the song, even though he did not right it. I plan to
research if it meant anything to him, and also review his other songs in
comparison of him choosing to put tis song n his album. I need to transition
more smoothly to help my audience keep in focus and to perceive a more in depth
meaning and understanding. Other information I need to gather is background or
history of the song artist. I am also adding in some input from the song
writers themselves to see how the song originated and if it had any meaning to
their lives. After getting all this done I hope my paper reaches the amount
required, I will look back a few times for grammar and spelling errors. Then
one last final revision to make sure my audience can understand my focus.
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